2015 WORD COUNT = 7106
words
I’ve been talking about my big project, my episodic fantasy
series, for a little while now. Each fortnight I’ll be sticking a new episode
up on the blog and hopefully people will enjoy, return, and get involved via
comments so that the story grows and grows.
The first episode is already up (here)
with episode two making its appearance this Friday. The posts viewing figures
seem okay and show that some people have dipped into the world I’m creating.
I’ve also had some positive comments from friends and family.
It’s very early days but so far I’m happy.
WHAT’S IN A NAME?
However, there has been one tiny little hiccup.
For some reason I neglected to do something that I have done
with almost all my big writing projects; Googled the title. I guess I’ve gotten
into the habit with short stories and flash fiction where it’s not so much of a
problem. But for novels, trilogies and series it’s a good idea to see if that
title you’ve grown to love from your projects birth to completion has already
been taken.
So, three days after I posted the first episode, I suddenly
remembered to check.
It took a little while to get my breath back and accept the
disappointment. FALLEN SWORDS not
only already existed as something that dominated its Google search but it was
also extremely close to what my project was.
FALLEN SWORDS is an online fantasy RPG. If it had
been something science fiction or historical then I might have pushed on and
kept the title. But a fantasy story with the same name as a fantasy video game
would probably just make people think I was writing fan-fiction.
Add to this the fact that, if you searched for my stories,
all you would get was pages of links to the game and my project would be buried.
So, it was time for a rebrand.
LOOKING FOR A
REPLACEMENT
I knew I wanted two words and that they needed the ring of
epic fantasy. With the help of a work colleague I composed a list using words
like ‘Fabled’, ‘Fire’, ‘Blades’, ‘Shadows’ and even ‘Scion’. I paired words up,
mixed them around, and slowly started to trim away those that didn’t give me a
feeling for what I was writing.
After that I used the tried and tested solution for list
selection; I put it to a vote.
Big thanks to those people who took an interest and helped
with this. It was pretty unanimous and the result is (spoiler) at the top of
this post.
Special mentions to a couple of titles that got close; FABLED
SWORDS and FRACTURED RISING.
But the one that stood out most was . . . FRACTURED DAWN.
Of course, that evening I had to go through all digital
matter and rename a few save files, update some spreadsheets and rebrand the
blog. But I think it’s all worth it (and the OCD side of me wouldn’t let it go).
COMING SOON
So, episode 1 is out there now and it feels kinda great. Up
until now I’ve only really posted flash fiction on this blog so it was nice to
put something out there that’s bigger, a little more in depth. I think I just
needed to force myself to release something of mine into the wild, to get it
out in front of eyes. Now I can be more relaxed and just update the story each
fortnight.
I have that first draft I wrote back in November and that’s
what I’m currently working from. It’s a very skeletal story in that form but
it’s allowing me to expand on the story, characters and world as I continue to
think about it on a daily basis (it’s probably what’s on my mind when I have a
spaced out look upon my face).
On rereading the draft and preparing the next episode I was
having trouble with some villainous motivation and the way in which the main
character gets from A to B. Instead of bending the draft or padding out his
journey, I’ve created a whole new scene that helps in three separate ways.
First it ends on another cliff-hanger which I think each of
these episodes will need going forward. It’s nothing epic, just a moment that
makes the reader wish that had the next episode to hand.
Secondly, the new scene gets the main character from A to B
without just walking it. The original version was a couple of paragraphs of just
walking and thinking. I couldn’t stretch this to a chapter but I didn’t want
him reaching his first destination as early as episode 2. Now I’ve managed to
move him without moving him (all will become clear).
And finally, and this will make more sense in a couple of
episodes time, it introduces a motive for something that happens further down
the line, motive that wasn’t there before. One of the things I’m dealing with
from the original draft is foreshadowing, which I’ll talk about more in a
future post. What it boils down to is that, while writing that first draft back
during NaNoWriMo 2014, there was no time to go back. So when an idea popped
into my head, when something was suddenly introduced, there is that mental
marker of “I’ll have to set that up earlier”.
Of course I had no solid plan and assumed (correctly) that,
when the time came, something would present itself and tell me why I randomly
created new characters on the spot and what they are doing in the story.
I’m still busy working on episode 2 at the moment (I’m still
taking it one episode at a time until I find my feet) but it will be ready for
Friday. I hope you’re looking forward to reading it as much as I’m enjoying
writing it. Please, please feel free to comment on the story so far, start
discussions amongst yourselves (is it wrong to assume that there are enough
people reading it to warrant a discussion?) and spread the word.
ELSEWHERE
Before I go just a quick round up of my other writing news.
I’m loving Micro Bookends at the moment. If you’ve been
following my weekly entries then you’ll know I’m currently trapped writing the
adventures of Chris & Mike. While it started as a one off joke I’m really
enjoying the extra challenge it gives me. I already have a word limit as well
as first and last words to deal with so why not add the extra dimension of
keeping the same characters going no matter what the prompts.
On a side note, I’m hearing whispers of ‘Chris and Mike vs’
fans beginning to make themselves known. Watch out world; Chris and Mike may be
the next big thing.
Meanwhile, over at Flash! Friday I managed to add another
accolade to my cabinet. While I didn’t win, I did manage to get one Honourable
mention as well as First Runner-up. It’s my first time getting both my entries
in the top flight and I’m extremely proud of both pieces.
And with that it’s back to the grindstone. As always, thank
you all for following my process.
See you in seven.
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